A poem. What do you think??
Question: Need to add more to it, but, yes, you guessed it, i'm stuck again.
I'm the target for your hate,
Your nasty pranks,
Your 'funny' ways.
I stumble, you laugh,
And inside i cry.
I get home and cut,
Praying to die.
Have to put on a mask,
Brave face to the pain.
Don't let the world know
That i suffer again.
Answers: i think it very sad and reminds me of being bullied at school for being disabled. great poem
Fantastic poem!!!...
It's the sort of thing you'd read on a bullying website...
It has alot of emotion in the words and expresses a lot of hurt...
Alot of people could relate to this...
Really good!!!!
Take care x
I thinks its finished,just the way it is.Its disturbing,but it shows the emotion from action to reaction.to add more would cheapen and lose the raw effect of the transaction between person A and person B
why dont you use that energy towards something good, dont let the fact that your bullied ruin your life. Trust me i know.
it's a very nice poem...
bautifully written..we all have our ways of dealing with the pain, some use art, some music (I like to listen to music),etc..
maybe poetry helps you xpress yourelf best..perhaps utilise your talent to heal yourself & it's a wonderful thing..
love & hugs xxGigi
Very well written, captures many of the emotions myself and many others have felt or are feeling.
I like it.. you are a poet
i like dark poems and that ones is really good can i send that one to a friend i wont send it till i get your permission
Hope you are not feeling this way.
It is a sad poem, but wonderfully wrote.
i really like it
But all this will pass, as time goes fast, then will I look back, and in my spoken chat, I will Thank God for my relief, as I cry-ed out in grief.
it actually means alot to me well done.x
I suggest you get yourself down to your docs and get on some anti depressants.
I suffer from depression and also get manic but i try not to wallow in my illness,so pull yourself together.
I guess I'll be the target of everyone's hate now!!!
Its a great poem!!!
But if its you than don't worry about that stuff. Well, i mean that, i went throw the same and still struggling to survive. But i manege and that's the good thing. Stop looking at the bad stuff in you're life and look at the good stuff.
Other than that, you're a great poet. You know that that can be a future job.
Good luck! ^_^
Ha, I like how some people are saying that you need help and councilling and other things, it made me laugh....I personally thought the poem was nice, I love reading this type of poetry. Keep writing, It would be better if you went into more detail, like going on about the angry feelings for being teased or the release you feel when you cut. I liked the part about the brave face, sounds like what many of us do everyday just to survive.
I'm the target for your hate,
Your nasty pranks,
Your 'funny' ways.
I stumble, you laugh,
And inside i cry.
I get home and cut,
Praying to die.
Have to put on a mask,
Brave face to the pain.
Don't let the world know
That i suffer again.
Answers: i think it very sad and reminds me of being bullied at school for being disabled. great poem
Fantastic poem!!!...
It's the sort of thing you'd read on a bullying website...
It has alot of emotion in the words and expresses a lot of hurt...
Alot of people could relate to this...
Really good!!!!
Take care x
I thinks its finished,just the way it is.Its disturbing,but it shows the emotion from action to reaction.to add more would cheapen and lose the raw effect of the transaction between person A and person B
why dont you use that energy towards something good, dont let the fact that your bullied ruin your life. Trust me i know.
it's a very nice poem...
bautifully written..we all have our ways of dealing with the pain, some use art, some music (I like to listen to music),etc..
maybe poetry helps you xpress yourelf best..perhaps utilise your talent to heal yourself & it's a wonderful thing..
love & hugs xxGigi
Very well written, captures many of the emotions myself and many others have felt or are feeling.
I like it.. you are a poet
i like dark poems and that ones is really good can i send that one to a friend i wont send it till i get your permission
Hope you are not feeling this way.
It is a sad poem, but wonderfully wrote.
i really like it
But all this will pass, as time goes fast, then will I look back, and in my spoken chat, I will Thank God for my relief, as I cry-ed out in grief.
it actually means alot to me well done.x
I suggest you get yourself down to your docs and get on some anti depressants.
I suffer from depression and also get manic but i try not to wallow in my illness,so pull yourself together.
I guess I'll be the target of everyone's hate now!!!
Its a great poem!!!
But if its you than don't worry about that stuff. Well, i mean that, i went throw the same and still struggling to survive. But i manege and that's the good thing. Stop looking at the bad stuff in you're life and look at the good stuff.
Other than that, you're a great poet. You know that that can be a future job.
Good luck! ^_^
Ha, I like how some people are saying that you need help and councilling and other things, it made me laugh....I personally thought the poem was nice, I love reading this type of poetry. Keep writing, It would be better if you went into more detail, like going on about the angry feelings for being teased or the release you feel when you cut. I liked the part about the brave face, sounds like what many of us do everyday just to survive.
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